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2) Most people agreed with me in saying that the quality of food and variety of food is bad, so I kept that as my target focus. Some gave me comments saying that I should work on focusing on detail in how I am going to change up the food and variety.3) Because of the feedback, I have decided to change and go more into detail about how I will change the meal plans. Along with this, I decided to question customers about the food and service they are currently receiving to strengthen my pitch.
Hi Andrew! I think you did a great job taking into account the feedback that you got on your previous pitches and making changes accordingly. I agree with you that your target focus should be on the quality and variety of food because that is a big issue on campus. You gave a good amount of information and I think it was smart to go interact with the customers to get an accurate picture on what changes are needed. Feel free to check out my pitch on an app that can help the library system at UF, http://caitlinc12.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHey Andrew! Great job on your elevator pitch. I agree with you and Caitlin that your target focus should be on quality of food because the current quality is terrible. I think you speak with a lot of confidence, which is great. You can check out my pitch here: http://sabinaent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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